You have undoubtedly gotten a lot better noticeably better! I LOVE the lions mane. I would personally like to use that technique/method of shading more in my own drawings.
David, Pages 1 and 4 are my favorites - they have the combination of attention to form and proportion, yet a nice looseness. The other pages are decent, too - just not as compelling a pose or as loose. Please work with multiple poses of a single subject, too.
I really like page 1 and 4 because the lines are really loose and also there seems like a lot of motions happening. Page 2 is decent but page 3 is kinda confusing as there's a chunk of red in it that takes over the whole drawing. It might be better to use less blocking color like that. Anyway, nice job:)
You have undoubtedly gotten a lot better noticeably better! I LOVE the lions mane. I would personally like to use that technique/method of shading more in my own drawings.
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So beautiful.
David,
ReplyDeletePages 1 and 4 are my favorites - they have the combination of attention to form and proportion, yet a nice looseness. The other pages are decent, too - just not as compelling a pose or as loose.
Please work with multiple poses of a single subject, too.
I really like page 1 and 4 because the lines are really loose and also there seems like a lot of motions happening. Page 2 is decent but page 3 is kinda confusing as there's a chunk of red in it that takes over the whole drawing. It might be better to use less blocking color like that. Anyway, nice job:)
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