
<---------- Starting out I was a little bit rusty not having practiced at all over the break but the figure on the bottom left has some success's to it.
Here we have some figures the teen on the bottom is probably the strongest. Believable weight and some of the environment ta-da --------------->

This sketch of the little girl is pretty strong, I feel and the janitor is ehhh kinda whatever
I like how you draw your subjects; you have an interesting style of drawing, it's realistic but it also has a cartoony characteristics. My favorite is the second page, where it has a guy looking down. It really looks like the guy is leaning on the balcony
ReplyDeleteHAY DARE! Your line quality is very good. You seem to have the pressure of your medium mastered! I on the other hand, am very heavy with mine haha =] Watch your proportions and poses/joints. Some of these poses are impossible unless these people could bend their bodies in strange ways haha =]
ReplyDeleteDavid,
ReplyDeleteAs we discussed, the one of the little child is very strong in its line weight variety and energy. Please finish some facial indication.
I thing these characters can get a little 'over flexible' looking when you don't indicate wrinkles, creases or folds in clothing - breaks in the direction of the cloth contour. Please consider this when develop your drawings.