David, The second page, top figure is your strongest here. The foreshortening and overlap of objects and limbs makes this simply a more interesting composition. Be more conscious of this before you begin a drawing. Don't give up on a drawing, either. If you focus on the upper body or portrait, you can still incorporate surroundings to make it more interesting.
David,
ReplyDeleteThe second page, top figure is your strongest here. The foreshortening and overlap of objects and limbs makes this simply a more interesting composition. Be more conscious of this before you begin a drawing. Don't give up on a drawing, either. If you focus on the upper body or portrait, you can still incorporate surroundings to make it more interesting.