David, Decent work, overall. Try to actively look for more dynamic poses, where there is even a slight amount of weight shift. The 3 pages where you do this are good examples. I am aware this can be difficult at a library sometimes. I don't know if Link was using the reference library but it's a decent rendering. If hands are obscured, invent a pose and bring them out, a little. Also, your strongest drawings are where you incorporate some of the surroundings. Please continue this. Good work.
I really like the figure number two a lot, and I drew the guy in the big puffy bubble coat too!!
ReplyDeleteDavid,
ReplyDeleteDecent work, overall. Try to actively look for more dynamic poses, where there is even a slight amount of weight shift. The 3 pages where you do this are good examples. I am aware this can be difficult at a library sometimes. I don't know if Link was using the reference library but it's a decent rendering.
If hands are obscured, invent a pose and bring them out, a little.
Also, your strongest drawings are where you incorporate some of the surroundings. Please continue this.
Good work.