David, The last two pages have some good qualities. Please be more conscious about where you place your subjects on the page. You're pushing them to the corners too much and the result is cropped limbs and a compacted composition. If you only do 2 drawings per page instead of 3 or 4, so be it. The nice drawings of the bicyclist and seated figure on the last page get cropped... avoid this.
I reallyn of the stylzation of your drawings. I also like when you go in and start exaggerating some things. The only thing I would point out that some of your figures appear to be stunted, or too short.
David,
ReplyDeleteThe last two pages have some good qualities.
Please be more conscious about where you place your subjects on the page. You're pushing them to the corners too much and the result is cropped limbs and a compacted composition. If you only do 2 drawings per page instead of 3 or 4, so be it.
The nice drawings of the bicyclist and seated figure on the last page get cropped... avoid this.
Hey!
ReplyDeleteI reallyn of the stylzation of your drawings. I also like when you go in and start exaggerating some things. The only thing I would point out that some of your figures appear to be stunted, or too short.